The Infernal City: An Elder Scrolls Novel by Greg Keyes – review

Books, Review | Aaron Teiser | November 25, 2009 at 9:31 am

The Infernal City is the first ever tie-in novel to the long-standing Elder Scrolls series of fantasy computer role-playing games. The setting is very much a traditional Western fantasy, with its pseudo-European medieval magical realm populated with various familiar fantasy races. On the other hand, it is built on a mythology, history, and lexicon which is entirely its own. The result is that a reader not familiar with the games, especially the fourth iteration, Oblivion, will be hopelessly lost. Make no mistake, this book is meant for fans and only they will get anything out of reading this book.

The story centers around Umbriel, a mysterious floating city that appears over the land, laying waste to all sentient life in its path and raising the bodies of the fallen to build an army of the undead. It sounds great, but sadly these events are covered with only a couple of pages. The bulk of the novel instead follows tomboy and amateur alchemist Annaig Hoinart and her lifelong friend Glim the Argonian (lizard-man). The pair are the only ones to escape the destruction of their homeland, Black Marsh, by the forces of Umbriel. They find themselves stranded on Umbriel, are subsequently captured, separated, and put to work in the city’s subterranean kitchens and an underwater farm called the Sump. Annaig uses the opportunity – and a handy magical communication device – to pass on whatever she learns about Umbriel to her would-be rescuer, the Imperial Prince Attrebus, and his mysterious and dangerous traveling companion Sul the Dunmer (dark elf). The other character of note is that of Colin, imperial inspector (secret police), and his investigation of the inexplicable conspiracy to assassinate Prince Attrebus. I say inexplicable because Attrebus has about as much sense as a box of rocks but isn’t half as dangerous as one.

The real reason to read the book, though, is actually to learn the backstory. The Infernal City is set forty-odd years after the end of The Elder Scrolls IV: Oblivion, and the most interesting parts of the book are those where we learn about the major events that transpired in that period, in particular those that gave rise to Umbriel itself.

My biggest problem with the story is that Umbriel lacks immediacy as a threat. We have only the vaguest notion of the danger it poses, and the reader isn’t shown any of whatever impact it has on the ground. The chef who runs the kitchen Annaig works in is of greater concern to the reader than the city.

Another problem is this novel is the first in a two-book sequence and only provides half of the story. There is absolutely no resolution to any part of the narrative. As a consequence the ending of The Infernal City is completely unsatisfying.

I would only recommend this book to those gamers who are looking to kill time while they await next year’s release of The Elder Scrolls V. In all fairness to the author, I imagine they are, after all, the intended audience.

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7 Comments

  1. Jay Tomio says:

    Found this book impossible to get into.

  2. Greyweather says:

    I’m guessing the only reason you tried was because Keyes had his name on it.

  3. Jay Tomio says:

    no, I actually was in the mood for something light and fun, but that it was Keyes perhaps pushed it over the top as a choice, as I’ve found him to be – at the very least – a solid writer. It was a combination of being a very light read that fought that very quality by wanting to be (seemingly, as I’m not familiar with the game or previous books) so insider friendly.

  4. Greyweather says:

    Oh, not just seemingly. Putting aside the unique vocabulary, the book is filled with tremendous implications that are utterly meaningless to anyone who has not played the last game, or better yet, the last two games.

    It would be like someone’s first exposure to Macbeth being that of watching a version with the first two acts cut out.

  5. Sword of Dor-lomin says:

    The plot doent sound great think they could have done much better. Elder Scrolls V lol dont know about that next year, you sure??

  6. Aaron Teiser says:

    When I was doing the write-up I googled TES:5 and I saw several articles which mentioned a 2010 release based on comments by Paul Oughton.

    Looking deeper, I see all those articles predate Todd Howard’s “don’t look for a new Elder Scrolls game in the near future.” comment at QuakeCon 2009.

    I apologize for not being more thorough in my research.

  7. Glarthir says:

    I read it and liked it. It’s really only for someone who has played the games.

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